2nd Draft Music Video

The feedback which I received told me to change and replace the shots where my artist is looking through the stairs as it had no relevance to the rest of my video and seemed to be randomly placed. I decided to replace the shot as they had no continuity with the rest of the video by using the red lights as they had become a motif throughout the video. I also decided to replace the shot where my artist is turning around while singing as I didn't particularly like the shot, it seemed too cliché for my video so decided to replace it with more abstract shots.